I wrote a song for my Girlfriend. Is it good?

  • Thread starter Thread starter I love ♫Jay Chou♫
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I wrote a song for my GF of 3 months going strong. What do you think of it? Yeah i know its really sappy and loveydovey lol. I was in the mood. Tell me what You think!!

I'll be ready any time you call
Take your pain and kill it all
Hold you tight when your down
and raise you up so you cant cry


I do it all for you you brighten up my day
When i think about you my pain just goes away
The thought of you gets me by you make my world fall away


I do it all for you your like a star in the sky
Shinin down on me, the glare in my eye
Your smiles always got me comin back for more


You know im here for you baby , i love you all the time
I'd be there if you ever fell girl, you'll feel my love till the end of time
i love your cute little voice it keeps me wantin more
When i wake up i think of you, always in my head

I do it all for you baby


I just wrote it Not all finished ,I dont even have a melody for it. But ill get that all together along with some chords etc etc. Might make some changes too.
 
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