i wrote a poem is it any good?

rainthunder

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I rest alone when the leaves turn brown
Strike my heart with a blunt sword
Shut my mouth as you try to please
The restless tied waves endlessly near

When the air turns thoughtlessly clear
I remember when you held me so near
Now the sun no longer comes here
Only a slant of a child with no name

Whispers from over the hillside
Call wastefully to the wall
 
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