i wrote a poem is it a good one?

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Luke

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my head is confused
like iv been abused
my body is weak
the eyes are wide
everything i see
is a mirror reflect
all the same road
confusing but the same
wind out factory
path is empty

ageing like a turtle
eat like a dog
dope faced woman
silver laced body
silk driven echo
ping pong message
dark man dagger
 
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