i wrote a new song please tell me its good or bad?

Alyson

New member
in this cold night
i cant see that moon in the sky
right now am alone
i walk and walk
too serch my way

it wasn't the life be4
i was not alone
but its was all happen so fast
my heart broken into picses

i lost everything
all those dreams i had
the hopes i had
and my love

la la la
oh oh
i shine in the colour that u shine
we cryied ,we smiled
but more than that i loved you


when i was alone
u were with me
but now
every thing changed
the life we had , dreams

oh oh

try to come and see you
but you don't let me in
i try to shed my tears
from every one
i faded in the colour

i shine in the colour ...........(1)


i got the same feeling for you now and will be
i wish we can be friends be again
do everything that we loved
oh oh now my life is changed
more than you
i wasn't the girl be4
and my life never going to shine again

i shine in the colour.....(1)


this bitterly cold night
makes me think about you
but some day you feel sorry
what you done with my life


written ;jiffy ann
song name ;colour



song :new life

oh yeah
come on
wake up people there is a party gonna start


la la la
na na na
this is the time
4 us to rok
oh yeah

come on boys and girls
put your hand s up
and do your moves
burn up and
heat the dance floor
and make the night
as fun as you can

give a wake up call 4 every one
open your eyes
and see the world
every one is a star
and don't think that your alone

this night is to
start a new life
4 get about the past
don't be scared about your futre
eveything is gonna be alright

so comeon boys and girls.........(1)


we are gonna start a new year
new dreams
new life

and gonna face
a lot of dangers
life may be good or bad
always keep a smile

and try to have some fun
dont care who you are
just rock out the party

so come on boys and girls.........(1)



song :i miss you

oh oh oh
in this world no one is alone
every one got some one
to share there life

but.......i
lost the one who is made 4 me
my heart hurt so much
deep inside


i know your not in this world
but i know you can hear me
some where
wish i could spent one day with you
but am not the god

i miss you....
oh oh
miss you
wish i could tell you that i love you
but its too late
yeah yeah
oh oh

your smile
your eye
your voice
every thing
i can see

i try to find a shooting star
to wish
so you could come back
too me

oh baby i miss you
 
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