I was assigned to write a haiku for school?

Penny

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I came up with a couple of them, but I can't choose which one is better sounding and more coherent/makes more sense.
Could you also state if you understood what it's about.

1.
The incubus preys
On the weak-willed and hungry.
Spawns bad trips and death.

2.
The incubus preys
On the pliable addicts
Spawns children of death

3.
The incubus preys
On the defenceless addicts
Spawns children of death
 
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