I saw folks ask what others think of poems they've written so here goes, lol?

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Irish

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Used to write poetry years ago, as in 15 years ago, lol....I remember some and would like to get feedback, positive or negative, doesn't matter! : )
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Free yourself
Something whispers from deep
Release yourself
In total, forever
Take destiny in hand
To a life you say never
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Yeah, it's light hearted stuff alright. Short but sweet, lol. Was published once upon a time in a college rag (but they'll print anything, lol) Suicide rates jumped an amazing 50%.....huh, get that?

While I'm here might as well type another one I wrote once upon a time, many moons ago!
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Give me a time when I can sit and think
With stars and moon and sea and breeze
Soft invisible kisses upon my cheek
And gentle smile to reassure
Though rain beats heavy and memories fade
This moment of grace I will find and hold
And cherish and keep
For if only now
Let now be forever
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Wrote quite a bit years ago, lost most of them, remember a few, don't write any more....not sure why.
 
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