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Which would be a better story, I have to right one for a competition coming up and I can't decide between two, tell me which one you think is better... Thanks..I Died and Went to Hell-- A hard-working, modest man who's had nothing more to focus on but his steady, full-time job as a carpenter. While replacing a window on a 25 story building he took a tumble, and above that, the class window fell on him. He then finds himself in Hell, so the story would be about what hell is and all of it's horrific details.A Sri Lankan Winter-- A P-40 owner is on his way to the island of Sri Lanka, on a spy mission from a private organization who suspects Transylvania is trading nuclear weapons with Sri Lanka in the early 1960's. On his way there he receives a few strange radio signals and then he enters a winter storm that eventually freezes his plane. He ejects and lands on an iced over ocean, Sri Lanka in the distance. He walks there and finds that it's not the same Sri Lanka from the history books. It's a frozen tundra with cities filled with lunatics. The main point of this story was to make an almost Parallel universe, have some scary stuff and then throw in some action, it's alittle hard to sum up as a story.