I NEED SOMEONE, to help me proofread my new years essay?

KR3W

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A New Year's resolution is a commitment that an individual makes. Resolutions are common because everyone wants to start a New Year right. I want to implement some resolutions to my year to be a better person and achieve goals. This year I’m going to make it right. I want to be a happier person, get better grades, and get fitter

To start off, my first example was to be a happier person. The reason is because I have been really upset since this girl I really liked hates me now. Since I lied to her, tricked her, and wasn’t really a nice person to her. I knew she liked me back, she was a really nice person, we used to talk everyday but as time went on it started to differ. Her friends would always talk behind my back and tell her stuff about me. I tried to ignore it but she hates me now because her friends told her all the lies I told her. I’ve met other people but they cannot be comparable as her. I am going to be a happier person by not lying nor tricking girls anymore. As a result, I learned that lying to a girl is a bad thing to do and karma will get you back.

Secondly, I want to get fitter because im slim and I want to build more muscle. As a result, if I do accomplish building more muscle, I will be able to work as a model for Abercrombie than being an impact team member. The benefits are that you get paid more. In addition to getting paid more I would also show off my six-pack and beat up any one who starts something with me. I'm going to achieve this goal by signing up to a gym with a trainer to help me bench and gain more stamina.

Lastly, I want to study more to get better grades and achieve more than being in resource classes. I know I can do this because I started slacking off in seventh grade, I was in all average classes but I just couldn’t keep up because I was goofing off to much or just now paying attention. Although, if I study hard I can catch up to some of my friends classes. I am going to achieve this goal by coming in after school or before school and paying attention in class and not acting stupid.

In conclusion, I hope by achieving all my goals I will be a better person and not give up. It will affect my life by looking forward to school, work, and to not be depressed every day. By being in a better mood, I can help people go through some of the problems I have been going thru too. So far, I am looking forward this year.
 
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