First, learn to show a proper link. It annoys me when I have to do your work in order to critique your pictures.
http://www.myspace.com/timelockphotography
All I saw was a bunch of poorly composed, poorly lit snapshots. If you're really interested in photography then take a couple of classes and learn about light, composition, exposure.
Open a free Flickr account. http://www.flickr.com Post your pictures there and when you want a critique you can link us to individual pictures. http://www.flickr.com/photos/drifter45h/3991210245/ as an example. Please don't expect anyone to look at 100 pictures at one time. Link us to your best 5 to 10 pictures.