Made some haiku poems and need them edited, little bit more descriptive/incorporating more nature....
1. Sitting on the deck
Listening to the birds sing
Soon they will be gone.
2. Trees are shedding leaves
Winter is fast approaching
Soon there will be snow
3. As the summer ends
The deer are roaming around
Eating our bushes
1. Sitting on the deck
Listening to the birds sing
Soon they will be gone.
2. Trees are shedding leaves
Winter is fast approaching
Soon there will be snow
3. As the summer ends
The deer are roaming around
Eating our bushes