I have one line, but I'm already stuck. I know what I want to write about and the meaning of it, but I can't think of any words. The first line is, "My love for you is like an untied shoe." And the meaning I have for it is... when you're little you don't know how to really tie a shoe yet, and then you learn how to tie one, but for some people it takes longer and then for other it doesn't take as long. Then some people learn how to tie their shoes in a different way than other do, and sometimes even when you do finally learn to tie your shoe it can still come undone, and some people double knot it. Also sometimes when your shoe laces come undone you can trip over them. Any suggestions?
I need some help with an unfinished poem.?
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