so i'm writing a paper on cell phones and the problems with them and i need to know if the sentence below sounds ok. i want to say person because i'm referring to adults and teenagers, so any help? i put quotes around the sentence i need help with. thanks anyone that helps.
"The problem isn't the cell phone, and it's not even the easily distracted person walking on their merry way. It's the troublesome combination of the two."
"The problem isn't the cell phone, and it's not even the easily distracted person walking on their merry way. It's the troublesome combination of the two."