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i really like to write but i have no idea if im any good at it. i need some opinions! this is kinda long but read it if its interesting! 
thanks.
its kind of sci-fi and about a teenager who has ear surgury and somehow the surgury enables him to hear Russian voices, planning a nuclear bomb attack on the USA. he ends up saving the country and becoming an international hero.
this is what i have so far:
Prologue
I could see it was going to happen. The driver in front of us didn’t see the cones. They hit the ice at eighty miles an hour and were sent spinning out of control. The SUV started moving against traffic, hitting us, hard. Our family-friendly minivan was pushed over the median and into the other lane on the interstate. Some truck carrying propane crashed into us, mashing the framework of our van into my right side. I was paralyzed, frozen physically in the van and mentally scared out of my mind. I could feel an unimaginable heat creeping up my side. I was on fire and there was nothing I could do about it.
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Ever since my surgery, I could hear things that I couldn’t hear before. I’ve told my therapist about this, but he thinks I’m still traumatized by the accident. He tells me it’s nothing, but I’m not so sure. The voices aren’t American or even in English. They sound Russian, or something strange and foreign. I usually hear them at night or the evening. It’s pretty interesting, actually. I don’t always hear them. The last time was two nights ago, when I was at soccer practice.
“Datum je bil spremenjen do avgusta petindvajsetega.” A male voice had said.
“To je dobro. Bomo imeli več časa.” A scratchier voice had replied.
The voices exchanged a few more strange words and then my ear clicked a few times, and they were gone.
I think what happened to cause this was my surgery. My entire right side had been charred in the accident. The doctor had to rebuild my skin tissue on my leg, stomach, arm and face. I have to wear a partial wig because my hair won’t grow back. The doctor also had to rebuild my ear. He inserted a metal piece shaped like the cartilage in a normal ear and then used a skin transplant to cover it up. It looks just like a normal ear, but it often clicks and buzzes softly. It used to really bother me, but now I barely notice.
thanks.its kind of sci-fi and about a teenager who has ear surgury and somehow the surgury enables him to hear Russian voices, planning a nuclear bomb attack on the USA. he ends up saving the country and becoming an international hero.
this is what i have so far:
Prologue
I could see it was going to happen. The driver in front of us didn’t see the cones. They hit the ice at eighty miles an hour and were sent spinning out of control. The SUV started moving against traffic, hitting us, hard. Our family-friendly minivan was pushed over the median and into the other lane on the interstate. Some truck carrying propane crashed into us, mashing the framework of our van into my right side. I was paralyzed, frozen physically in the van and mentally scared out of my mind. I could feel an unimaginable heat creeping up my side. I was on fire and there was nothing I could do about it.
One
Ever since my surgery, I could hear things that I couldn’t hear before. I’ve told my therapist about this, but he thinks I’m still traumatized by the accident. He tells me it’s nothing, but I’m not so sure. The voices aren’t American or even in English. They sound Russian, or something strange and foreign. I usually hear them at night or the evening. It’s pretty interesting, actually. I don’t always hear them. The last time was two nights ago, when I was at soccer practice.
“Datum je bil spremenjen do avgusta petindvajsetega.” A male voice had said.
“To je dobro. Bomo imeli več časa.” A scratchier voice had replied.
The voices exchanged a few more strange words and then my ear clicked a few times, and they were gone.
I think what happened to cause this was my surgery. My entire right side had been charred in the accident. The doctor had to rebuild my skin tissue on my leg, stomach, arm and face. I have to wear a partial wig because my hair won’t grow back. The doctor also had to rebuild my ear. He inserted a metal piece shaped like the cartilage in a normal ear and then used a skin transplant to cover it up. It looks just like a normal ear, but it often clicks and buzzes softly. It used to really bother me, but now I barely notice.