I need help writing this poem. Feedback or suggestions?

richelle

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this is all i have so far for a poem related to the holocaust:

Never shall I forget the feeling of security,
Knowing I will be safe with my family and friends
Never shall I forget having a warm dinner with my family,
Now I am only left with little to no food.
Never shall I forget being torn away from my loved ones,
Not knowing if they’ll live another day or if I will even live another day
Never shall I forget the desperate cries for help
that still linger in my ears


I think repeating never shall i forget might get too annoying? should i keep on going with that or should I say something different? If so please give me ideas!
 
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