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communities?"? My Expository Writing class read three essays: The Power of Context by Malcolm Gladwell, The Solitary Stroller in the City by Rebecca Solnit, and The Myth of the Ant Queen by Steven Johnson.
My original thesis needed reworking cause it still followed the high school five paragraph essay format which instantly fails in this class
It is
Although there are many variables to consider when making streets safer, safer urban communities can be formed by creating more organized streets, having more law enforcement officers regulating criminal activity, and establishing more places and programs for people to attend
My instructor said somewhere buried in there lies a thesis and the key words are "organized, regulating, and establishing"
My class couldn't think of a thesis out of it and neither could he, so I was wondering what can I make my new thesis?
My original thesis needed reworking cause it still followed the high school five paragraph essay format which instantly fails in this class
It is
Although there are many variables to consider when making streets safer, safer urban communities can be formed by creating more organized streets, having more law enforcement officers regulating criminal activity, and establishing more places and programs for people to attend
My instructor said somewhere buried in there lies a thesis and the key words are "organized, regulating, and establishing"
My class couldn't think of a thesis out of it and neither could he, so I was wondering what can I make my new thesis?