I need help writing a Descriptive paragraph about the Peanut Man?

This is what I have so far:
The strangest looking man you have ever seen has the body in the shape of a figure eight. We all have seen him a time or two and here and there. We do not pay much attention to this happy gentleman, but if you were to ever take the time to look at him you would see what a nice man he is. With his sleek black cane grasped tightly in his left hand he gives us all a friendly wave. His hands are covered in clean white gloves. In his eye is a glassy spectacle helping him to see near and far.


By no means do I feel comfortable turning this into my teacher tomorrow for a final grade. I would really appreciate it if you guys could help me make this sound better. Basically all I have is just random stuff thrown together about the Planters Peanut man. That is all I could come up to write about at the time lol.

Thank you so much!
 
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