I need help with my sonnet. I need to know if im following rules and if not tell me where to correct. (My english is very bad and i have to put up with 3 languages...)
I sill remember when i had to move
I gave up many things for this change
The feeling itself was hard to remove
Leaving my old home was very strange
I left behind many good old friends
now i have to put up with this place
where i had to get used to the new trends
it was hard to remember a new face
I always saw this place as really bad
I go to school with some new looking guys (this one is bad)
this whole ordeal would make me really sad
not long from now ill be saying my goodbyes
Now that i look back and see that im here
i realize there was nothing to fear
this is about me moving into a country that i didnt want to move to but then i realized it was not that bad.
If you can help i will pay on paypal, leave youre account name, i have a lot hanging off of this project
I sill remember when i had to move
I gave up many things for this change
The feeling itself was hard to remove
Leaving my old home was very strange
I left behind many good old friends
now i have to put up with this place
where i had to get used to the new trends
it was hard to remember a new face
I always saw this place as really bad
I go to school with some new looking guys (this one is bad)
this whole ordeal would make me really sad
not long from now ill be saying my goodbyes
Now that i look back and see that im here
i realize there was nothing to fear
this is about me moving into a country that i didnt want to move to but then i realized it was not that bad.
If you can help i will pay on paypal, leave youre account name, i have a lot hanging off of this project