Natasha Cherrise
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Ok so I'm writing a novel and there is going to be a kissing scene. I want it to be very romantic and passionate. So the scenario is that there are these two 16 year old kids who got stranded on an island. They have been best friends for years, but now they got into an argument and they haven't talked for a few days. The girl gets hurt and he helps nurse her back to health.
Now that she is better they're talking, but she then brings up the subject of their argument. The guy tells her why he started it. Then he pretty much tells her that he thinks that she's really beautiful. He is suppose to kiss her unexpectedly at this part, but I didn't know how to write it.
If you could give me some made up scenes or some tips- it could really help.
Thanks for everything.
P.S. This is a YA novel so it can't be too graphic, but it also can't be to plan.
The point of view is of the girl.
The girl has never been kissed before. Not because she isn't attractive , but because she's shy.
Now that she is better they're talking, but she then brings up the subject of their argument. The guy tells her why he started it. Then he pretty much tells her that he thinks that she's really beautiful. He is suppose to kiss her unexpectedly at this part, but I didn't know how to write it.
If you could give me some made up scenes or some tips- it could really help.
Thanks for everything.
P.S. This is a YA novel so it can't be too graphic, but it also can't be to plan.
The point of view is of the girl.
The girl has never been kissed before. Not because she isn't attractive , but because she's shy.