MarissaRave
New member
with iambic pentameter and rhyming scheme.
So far I have this:
You and I have always been friends
Always joking, laughing, smiling, clowning
But it seems our hearts will never mend
And it seems to always leave me frowning
I hear your whisper in the air I breathe.
Together on this dark and cold night
Wishing you would breathe you love me
Having you here never felt so right
I know it sucks, but I'm getting so frustrated. It's about me liking my best friend. and if anyone could give me any ideas on how to end it, that'd be great.
So far I have this:
You and I have always been friends
Always joking, laughing, smiling, clowning
But it seems our hearts will never mend
And it seems to always leave me frowning
I hear your whisper in the air I breathe.
Together on this dark and cold night
Wishing you would breathe you love me
Having you here never felt so right
I know it sucks, but I'm getting so frustrated. It's about me liking my best friend. and if anyone could give me any ideas on how to end it, that'd be great.