I need help on a poem i started?

Livvy R

New member
ok so last night i was up till like two and suddenly i got an idea for a new poem. but i only got like four lines and now i need help. or atleast tell me if its a good start. BTW go to my profile and read my other poem.

I watched my dreams flicker past
each one made of ash
How could you let them just burn
you should know that now its my turn
 
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