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tenpoundhero6
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just so you know... there's a lot of snowboard lingo in here
but i need help with the last two lines... "The Way of Life"
The Way of Life is what riders call snowboarding and i can't choose whether to keep the last line in or out or move it somewhere else
what do you think??
White Rapture
The ambiance of the ice-chilling wind
Is always there above the flake,
The demise of the stare felt from my rivals across the way
The adrenaline burns deep inside my heart,
Strap on my board, put on some tunes, press play,
Isolate my mind and mentality on only the pipe
Peer down that gruesome vast drop and scope it out;
I head down towards, wave my arms to up the noise
Drop in, pick up speed, go for height,
Twenty feet high; pretty psyched out
I go down the steep slope
My board carves in the hard snow
It paints a picture,
That becomes more elaborate with time,
Make haste down the lip into something epic to come
Just happen to pull Bingo by Steeze
Fraught as can be, went for next stunt,
Disaster struck,
Decked out on top
Opened my eyes, saw a shinny round reflector on the doctors head,
Looked around, saw my crew standing over me,
Away from the slopes, definitely dislike
Just laying here, no snow in sight
Came across a table, covered with flowers and cards
Reached over to grab one, arm was heavy,
White cast covering them both,
Doctor said take it easy you’re still so weak, even lucky to be alive
Handed me a card, already open, read the message to myself
It said get well soon, with warmest thoughts,
Doctor handed me another one, a thick one, this time unopened,
Said it was from my fans, didn’t know I had any,
Opened it up, one card inside, the top said we love you,
Like a flip book, inside, covered
With nothing but signatures, of my fans
People I didn’t even know
People who didn’t even know me,
People…
Who cared for me;
It made no sense; I wasn’t anyone special,
Anyone famous, anyone known,
These were the people watching when it occurred
I barely remember what happened
I didn’t even know, that I was in oblivion for two days,
But I did know, when I peered out the window,
That these unknown people, standing there in the street
Gazing upon my casement,
They wanted me to understand,
To understand that, I was now recognized
Now I thought I was gratified just to be alive,
But now truth is, I’m grateful just for the support,
And ill be thankful,
If I ever get back on a board again,
To be an idol for these unknown people,
Some would say Im crazy to get back on again
But what can I say… It’s the Way of Life
And the Way of Life is a great thing to have
but i need help with the last two lines... "The Way of Life"
The Way of Life is what riders call snowboarding and i can't choose whether to keep the last line in or out or move it somewhere else
what do you think??
White Rapture
The ambiance of the ice-chilling wind
Is always there above the flake,
The demise of the stare felt from my rivals across the way
The adrenaline burns deep inside my heart,
Strap on my board, put on some tunes, press play,
Isolate my mind and mentality on only the pipe
Peer down that gruesome vast drop and scope it out;
I head down towards, wave my arms to up the noise
Drop in, pick up speed, go for height,
Twenty feet high; pretty psyched out
I go down the steep slope
My board carves in the hard snow
It paints a picture,
That becomes more elaborate with time,
Make haste down the lip into something epic to come
Just happen to pull Bingo by Steeze
Fraught as can be, went for next stunt,
Disaster struck,
Decked out on top
Opened my eyes, saw a shinny round reflector on the doctors head,
Looked around, saw my crew standing over me,
Away from the slopes, definitely dislike
Just laying here, no snow in sight
Came across a table, covered with flowers and cards
Reached over to grab one, arm was heavy,
White cast covering them both,
Doctor said take it easy you’re still so weak, even lucky to be alive
Handed me a card, already open, read the message to myself
It said get well soon, with warmest thoughts,
Doctor handed me another one, a thick one, this time unopened,
Said it was from my fans, didn’t know I had any,
Opened it up, one card inside, the top said we love you,
Like a flip book, inside, covered
With nothing but signatures, of my fans
People I didn’t even know
People who didn’t even know me,
People…
Who cared for me;
It made no sense; I wasn’t anyone special,
Anyone famous, anyone known,
These were the people watching when it occurred
I barely remember what happened
I didn’t even know, that I was in oblivion for two days,
But I did know, when I peered out the window,
That these unknown people, standing there in the street
Gazing upon my casement,
They wanted me to understand,
To understand that, I was now recognized
Now I thought I was gratified just to be alive,
But now truth is, I’m grateful just for the support,
And ill be thankful,
If I ever get back on a board again,
To be an idol for these unknown people,
Some would say Im crazy to get back on again
But what can I say… It’s the Way of Life
And the Way of Life is a great thing to have