I get out of bed after a sleepless night.
Just thinking of you and feeling of shite.
I had you and lost you,you're gone for good
i want you and need you and dont know if i should,
call you to see if you are feeling the same,
i know its my fault and its me to blame.
But after all those years of friendship and love,
we cannot be silent and cannot give up.
I will love you forever,are you to blind to see?
that our love is magnetic, its so meant to be.
Behind our arguements and all our fights,
are beautiful years and interesting nights.
Where we stayed up late just cuddling in bed,
we would lie there all night til our eyes were red,
and we could not sleep because our love was a flame,
that i nearly put out as i put you to shame.
Yet that flame still burns heavy in my light empty heart
The flame burns smaller the longer apart.
This is an attempt you win you back,
because my heart is breaking,forming a crack,
that will later turn into pieces of sad,
pieces of regret that will drive me mad.
So please come back,my arms open wide,
to hold you and love you for the rest of my time.
This took me about 20 minutes. Im 15 and really love writing poetry. Critisize if you want,will help me improve my writing
Just thinking of you and feeling of shite.
I had you and lost you,you're gone for good
i want you and need you and dont know if i should,
call you to see if you are feeling the same,
i know its my fault and its me to blame.
But after all those years of friendship and love,
we cannot be silent and cannot give up.
I will love you forever,are you to blind to see?
that our love is magnetic, its so meant to be.
Behind our arguements and all our fights,
are beautiful years and interesting nights.
Where we stayed up late just cuddling in bed,
we would lie there all night til our eyes were red,
and we could not sleep because our love was a flame,
that i nearly put out as i put you to shame.
Yet that flame still burns heavy in my light empty heart
The flame burns smaller the longer apart.
This is an attempt you win you back,
because my heart is breaking,forming a crack,
that will later turn into pieces of sad,
pieces of regret that will drive me mad.
So please come back,my arms open wide,
to hold you and love you for the rest of my time.
This took me about 20 minutes. Im 15 and really love writing poetry. Critisize if you want,will help me improve my writing