I just wrote something, was wondering how other people feel about it?

Ailianna Beauty

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I wasn't trying to rhyme or anything like that, i do in some parts, but i just like how it sounded...not sure if it keeps any sense though...

I don’t know why
The stars are shining bright in the sky
And I try
But all I do is cry

I gave you all of my heart
You were quick to rip me apart
On the floor bleeding
I’m still in love

Like the flowers need the sun
You’re my number one
Like the water makes the snow
I hate putting on a show
I’m not all right

Maybe this is my tragic story
It replays over and over again
You always say that you’re sorry
But when I die what happens then?

And I keep believing in you
The only thing that pulls me through
But you hurt me ya you do
I don’t know why
I don’t know why

I still try
 
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