I just wrote a small poem. What do you think?

cici

New member
After watching For Colored Girls, I was inspired and wrote this. I just wanted to share it! Please, no harsh critique, I'm not a poet. xD Here it is:

Judge me not, versed existence.
With your codes and your signals,
passing me up,
succeeding--
My love is too pure to have thrown back in my face.

I admire in quiet.
In daydreams splashed by sunlight;
Songs whistled through attendant wind.

You dance your waltzes of experience.
Scoffing at others' ignorance,
daunting me,
exceeding--
My love is too sweet to have thrown back in my face.
My love is too sweet, you veterans.
Too sweet.
 
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