I just sat down and wrote, and wondered, tell me what you think about my poetry?

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Natasha E

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I myself think differently of anger
Then you will, or anyone else
Ever will
My experiences
My brain
My actions
Shape
Mold
How my emotions are carried out
And how I believe each emotion to
Feel
I think differently of anger
Joy
Hate
Love
Sorrow

I give love
Easily
It’s often given
Why
It’s accepted
Wanted to be received
Hate
It’s looked down upon
Never wished to be received
And once given
Never leaves
Love
It wanders
Never stays in one place
One person

What should I do to improve?
 
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