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Rosie B
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I have been interested in poetry for a little bit and wanted to try and write some...Ive written a couple and would like an honest opinion not saying there the best but the first poems ive ever wrote please and thankyou
My Love
My love for you is all I need
I only plead for you to be with me
When I feel your touch my heart skips a beat
You are my only defeat
I can no longer hold the these feelings
You heal my soul
You are my soaring dove
You are my love
Fantasy
I want the taste of your lips
The way your hands grave my hips
The way we sway as one
Your whispers in my ear have me numb
Your breath against my breast is as ice
When you look in my eyes I am enticed
Cuddled in your arms all night
There is no fight
You are my Hennessey
Which is why you are my fantasy
I Desire
All I have is the need to want
I love the taste of lips on mine but yours especially
If I tell you I love you is that a little blunt
Your love is more than just sexually
My sins I’ve given to you has left me taint
This heart will beat for you internally
I am no longer a saint
Is it wrong of me to want to be together
When your hands wonder my body I grow faint
You are my one and only that I admire
Therefore that makes you my desire
Demons
They get grip
They don’t let go
They in my head
They have the flow
They take control
They have my soul
They stay and
They are my demons
My Love
My love for you is all I need
I only plead for you to be with me
When I feel your touch my heart skips a beat
You are my only defeat
I can no longer hold the these feelings
You heal my soul
You are my soaring dove
You are my love
Fantasy
I want the taste of your lips
The way your hands grave my hips
The way we sway as one
Your whispers in my ear have me numb
Your breath against my breast is as ice
When you look in my eyes I am enticed
Cuddled in your arms all night
There is no fight
You are my Hennessey
Which is why you are my fantasy
I Desire
All I have is the need to want
I love the taste of lips on mine but yours especially
If I tell you I love you is that a little blunt
Your love is more than just sexually
My sins I’ve given to you has left me taint
This heart will beat for you internally
I am no longer a saint
Is it wrong of me to want to be together
When your hands wonder my body I grow faint
You are my one and only that I admire
Therefore that makes you my desire
Demons
They get grip
They don’t let go
They in my head
They have the flow
They take control
They have my soul
They stay and
They are my demons