I haven't really written poetry..but here it goes...?

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Brian

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It's not half bad. The concept of the poem was clear. I feel that the poem is very emotional. Well my advice is to be more poetic. Well I mean like it didn't sound very poetic. It sounds like sentences. I hope this helps.
 
real friends dont care if your rich or poor,
real friends love the true you; nothing less nothing more.

fake friends will tell you your in the group for good,
fake friends talk behind your back; when secretly you knew they would.

real friends would do anything for you no matter if they owe you or not,
real friends will always lend you the American Eagle dress they just bought.

fake friends will suck up and tell you your lipgloss looks great,
fake friends will leave you when you switch schools or move to a different state.

real friends will let you lean on them when fake friends make it known that they are having fun without you
real friends remind you all the time that they love you

does it suck? I havent really written poetry except just playing around but this is from personal experience...
 
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