For English, at school, I have to do an Oral Presentation on 'Why is life fair.'
Could somebody please read my draft and tell me what they think or what I can add to get me high marks? Thaankyou
Life is fair because you are the only one who can take control of your life and make decisions that can influence the way you live your life and your future. They say that what you put into life is what you get out of it. If you work hard you can achieve anything and by developing a positive attitude and never giving up on things, even when they seem hard or difficult can make you a move confident or stronger person.
Sometimes when circumstances make us feel like life is not fair, as hard as it may be, we should always try to find something positive within that obstacle and use it to help us get through.
Life is especially fair when we have people around us like family and friends who not only care and love us, but are always there in good and difficult times and continuously help us, to feel better about our lives.
I feel lucky to have the life I am living. I have a great family who love me, wonderful friends all of which make my life a happy one.
Could somebody please read my draft and tell me what they think or what I can add to get me high marks? Thaankyou

Life is fair because you are the only one who can take control of your life and make decisions that can influence the way you live your life and your future. They say that what you put into life is what you get out of it. If you work hard you can achieve anything and by developing a positive attitude and never giving up on things, even when they seem hard or difficult can make you a move confident or stronger person.
Sometimes when circumstances make us feel like life is not fair, as hard as it may be, we should always try to find something positive within that obstacle and use it to help us get through.
Life is especially fair when we have people around us like family and friends who not only care and love us, but are always there in good and difficult times and continuously help us, to feel better about our lives.
I feel lucky to have the life I am living. I have a great family who love me, wonderful friends all of which make my life a happy one.