I have another poem.. Can u tell me Wat u think of this one?

Ms.Lady

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Kinda meant to rhyme... And Does is even make sence? :

When the night is dark and all is silent, close your eyes and listen again, for my love for you will light up the skies, and forever it will shine til the end <3

Too much syllabels?? btw this is only the 2nd poem I've ever written.. Just saying.. Cuz im not good with words lol=)
 
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