I HAVE a Poem And I want to publish it and so does my teacher but wat do u guys think...

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...of it? Im nobody
in a high school with 600 kids
Im nobody
With poeple the same
and everyone to blame
Im nobdy
So many kids
and no true friend
Im nobody
but with my heart
and my world
i will be
Sombody.
 
Very nice! you should definately publish it! I also write poems. Here's one, tell me if you like it.

The Moon pulls the tides away
And the ocean pushes from night to day
A constant battle never to be won
Neither side can be undone
The Moon and Ocean will still be there
Fighting their battle from here to there
When all is gone and far away
The Moon and Ocean will always stay
To push and pull from night to day.

one day i just felt like writing a poem and this jumped into my head.
 
It depends, how old are you?
And I is I, not i. And I'm is I'm, not Im.
Sorry, that just bugs me.
 
I might skip one of the "I'm nobody"'s as it gets a bit repetative. Otherwise, short, sweet, to the point. I like the optomistic ending, makes me feel like it went somewhere.

Fix all the grammar stuff quickly. It makes you look amateur to those in the publishing world.
 
Sounds very nice. If you want it published, you better take it off Y!A answers. Good luck.
 
I can promise you it will not ever be published. Not to hurt your feelings, just to stop you from wasting your time or getting your hopes up. Even very good poetry that is current with the style of the times is extremely hard to publish, it's a dying art and no one buys poetry anymore.
 
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