I found some poetry I wrote back in January. Was I on some sort of drug?

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whiskyblanket

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Sorry it's kind of long and... strange. If someone bears with it, you'll be my hero.

Lustily licking its lips,
The lobster makes its move.
The chair looks crunchy sweet
And screams a bloody curse.
If Dave or Scott pulled down your pants
Then would you let them in?
I'm dying to see how long you'd last
Without the sherbert man.
If jobs were gone to overseas,
Then would you ring the bells?
I'm dying to see you leave the land
And drown your gut with salt -
Or in the case you stand your ground,
They'll surely beat you in the race -
And feed you to a lobster blue,
While babies fly on golden wing.
 
Keep it anyway....put it in a book or binder however you keep your work.

Sometimes I jot down random thoughts. They don't always make sense when I read them later, but at the time they flowed.

Somewhere in there you know what you were trying to say...or not. Maybe you will be inspired from it later on and write a masterpiece...or not.

Stay in school for now. (just joking...no really...)

the truth is if you like to write then you should always save your work...sometimes it does inspire you to write better. You might pull out a line or two and take it into another direction.
 
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