I asked this earlier, but I want a few more opinions. My poems?

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"Love"
When I wake up next to you
It sends chills down my spine
I pinch myself to see if I'm dreaming
To see if you're really mine

I see you sleeping so peacefully,
You're eyes are tightly closed
I press my lips on top of yours
No sadness can impose

I hear your heart beat along with mine
It's music to my ears
A song that will never get old,
Not even through the years

Together forever
It's the promise we made
A promise I'll hold dear at heart
Until my dying day
Tell me what you think?

"I'll Pray"
You say that you love me
You say that you care
Why is it when I need you most
You're never really there?

I hold so much inside of me
So much you'll never know
There's so much I want to tell you
Yet my feelings go untold

I'll cry once you're asleep
Until I can cry no more,
I'll pray the Lord will be with me
Through this love that feels like war.
Oops, just realized this isn't in the poetry section. Oh well, I'd like your opinions too! :D
 
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