Before Jean came to town, Catherine's best friend had been Anna. It wasn't that Anna was particularly sweet or even pleasant to have around, but Catherine kept her around anyway. Catherine needed someone immoral and completely wild. Someone she could have a load of fun with.
Anna always got drunk first; always started fights; and was the one who no man could resist or trust. Just with any friendship they had many problems. Anna was just as unpredictable as Catherine. Of course they fought each other but hardly argued with Jean. This is why Catherine preferred Jean’s company. Anna has never felt guilty for the things she has done?
They had always gotten into fights over petty things but mostly about men. Anna had no class, she spread rumors about Catherine’s man-eating ways and lied about her using drugs a few times. Catherine had never left her alone unsupervised when she was away longer then ten minutes. She caught Anna a few times stealing some of her cheaper jewels. Anna hadn’t seen Catherine since Jean came into the picture, she wasn’t ready to let go of being with the popular princess just yet.
It was almost revolting how they giggled like children and how inseparable they were. She didn't understand why Catherine would choose Jean of all people to be her best friend. Over the past week, Anna had been watching Jean's every move. The girl was nearly perfect, she was an unexpected breath of fresh air to Anna. There was always something wrong with the girls that had slept over Catherine's mansion, they had no class and some had no senses.
The very thought of Catherine and Jean's close relationship raddled her. Anna oozed jealousy and it seemed to posses her thoughts, she hated how they were together. Jean always comforted Catherine and in return, she'd trust Jean with her deep dark secrets and protect her from the liars and traders. Jean was Catherine's loyal other half, nothing could rip them apart.
(rewrite it or give me tips. does it sound real)
Anna always got drunk first; always started fights; and was the one who no man could resist or trust. Just with any friendship they had many problems. Anna was just as unpredictable as Catherine. Of course they fought each other but hardly argued with Jean. This is why Catherine preferred Jean’s company. Anna has never felt guilty for the things she has done?
They had always gotten into fights over petty things but mostly about men. Anna had no class, she spread rumors about Catherine’s man-eating ways and lied about her using drugs a few times. Catherine had never left her alone unsupervised when she was away longer then ten minutes. She caught Anna a few times stealing some of her cheaper jewels. Anna hadn’t seen Catherine since Jean came into the picture, she wasn’t ready to let go of being with the popular princess just yet.
It was almost revolting how they giggled like children and how inseparable they were. She didn't understand why Catherine would choose Jean of all people to be her best friend. Over the past week, Anna had been watching Jean's every move. The girl was nearly perfect, she was an unexpected breath of fresh air to Anna. There was always something wrong with the girls that had slept over Catherine's mansion, they had no class and some had no senses.
The very thought of Catherine and Jean's close relationship raddled her. Anna oozed jealousy and it seemed to posses her thoughts, she hated how they were together. Jean always comforted Catherine and in return, she'd trust Jean with her deep dark secrets and protect her from the liars and traders. Jean was Catherine's loyal other half, nothing could rip them apart.
(rewrite it or give me tips. does it sound real)