...why is that? (Catherine is going to fight a girl. johnny is driving. jean is in the passenger seat scared)
Jean buckled her seat belt, she knew Catherine would yell at who ever was driver to speed up. Catherine punched the glove compartment. "Drive fast Johnny."
He looked over at her, "Where does she live."
"Oh yeah, she lives next to Mikes house."
"Okay." Johnny started the car and backed out.
Jean felt nervous. 'Do I stop her from hurting this girl even though she deserves getting beat up.' Jean thought. She put her hands on Catherines shoulders, "Calm down Catherine." Catherine shook her head angrily. Johnny stepped hard on the gas, he didnt want to get yelled at for driving too slow.They arrived at Roxy's house fast because she lived not five minutes away.
Johnny stepped on the break forcing everyone to jult forward against their seat belts. Catherine stepped out of the car and slammed it shut. She stretched her arms out readying herself for the fight. She took a deep breath and adjusted her outfit closed her eyes. She felt the rage rush back.
(rewrite this for the better and you win)
Jean buckled her seat belt, she knew Catherine would yell at who ever was driver to speed up. Catherine punched the glove compartment. "Drive fast Johnny."
He looked over at her, "Where does she live."
"Oh yeah, she lives next to Mikes house."
"Okay." Johnny started the car and backed out.
Jean felt nervous. 'Do I stop her from hurting this girl even though she deserves getting beat up.' Jean thought. She put her hands on Catherines shoulders, "Calm down Catherine." Catherine shook her head angrily. Johnny stepped hard on the gas, he didnt want to get yelled at for driving too slow.They arrived at Roxy's house fast because she lived not five minutes away.
Johnny stepped on the break forcing everyone to jult forward against their seat belts. Catherine stepped out of the car and slammed it shut. She stretched her arms out readying herself for the fight. She took a deep breath and adjusted her outfit closed her eyes. She felt the rage rush back.
(rewrite this for the better and you win)