writing romance. plz help? He looked down at her hand on his wrist, he put his hand on top of hers. Mike looked at Catherine with such warmth she couldn’t help feel safe as a smile came over her face. Jean knew Mike loved Catherine, she admitted to her that Mike was just a guy who she had around for protection, she loved being loved and protected. Jean, stood up and walked to the restroom watching them stare at each other. ‘I hope Catherine doesn’t hurt him, he’s a nice guy with a big crush,’ Jean thought as she passed them.
(rewrite this for the better and win) or give me tips to improve
(rewrite this for the better and win) or give me tips to improve
