Going through life with nothing to worry bout
Is how i lived on but now I'm just full of doubt
I'm called a failure they say that he'll never sprout
He's to weak, he's a punk, he ain't nothing to worry bout
It ain't the greatest sound when you're already down
With these words so profound pulling you underground
I tried whatever i could to continue moving forward
But whenever i would I'd be pulled even lower
With the problems i face, I got enough on my mind
But i pick up the pace, to keep myself in the line
To that fine, future career that you all want
Blinded by the subliminal fear, like a taunt
That will haunt you till the day that you die
Like the Grim creeping up all around you
Controlling every aspect of your life
It's unreal what you feel
But the truth is never too far behind
You need to rise
Confront and show that you got nothing to hide
Overcome all these things that you hate and despise
Every single person that played with your fu*ken mind
Will be left to hide, cornered to be forgotten
Watching you on a screen, how you build and arise
From the slums that you fought to shining high in the skies
First off, constructive criticism only, anything's accepted. If you're gonna bi*ch out of stupidity don't bother.
Still new at this, and this was actually the second thing i wrote, (the first came out too shi**y for my liking). I got 2-3 other written down but this one seems to just have flowed out and the others seem like i pieced then together forcefully.
No one knows i write, not even family. I just get this off my mind at times and if I'm bored enough I'd just make up rhymes that don't talk about the common sh*t like guns, drugs, sex, girls, etc.
Inspiration: Mike Shinoda from Linkin Park and Immortal Technique
Genre: Rap/Hip-Hop
I've gotten that it's a long @$$ verse but i wouldn't know how to split that up.
Is how i lived on but now I'm just full of doubt
I'm called a failure they say that he'll never sprout
He's to weak, he's a punk, he ain't nothing to worry bout
It ain't the greatest sound when you're already down
With these words so profound pulling you underground
I tried whatever i could to continue moving forward
But whenever i would I'd be pulled even lower
With the problems i face, I got enough on my mind
But i pick up the pace, to keep myself in the line
To that fine, future career that you all want
Blinded by the subliminal fear, like a taunt
That will haunt you till the day that you die
Like the Grim creeping up all around you
Controlling every aspect of your life
It's unreal what you feel
But the truth is never too far behind
You need to rise
Confront and show that you got nothing to hide
Overcome all these things that you hate and despise
Every single person that played with your fu*ken mind
Will be left to hide, cornered to be forgotten
Watching you on a screen, how you build and arise
From the slums that you fought to shining high in the skies
First off, constructive criticism only, anything's accepted. If you're gonna bi*ch out of stupidity don't bother.
Still new at this, and this was actually the second thing i wrote, (the first came out too shi**y for my liking). I got 2-3 other written down but this one seems to just have flowed out and the others seem like i pieced then together forcefully.
No one knows i write, not even family. I just get this off my mind at times and if I'm bored enough I'd just make up rhymes that don't talk about the common sh*t like guns, drugs, sex, girls, etc.
Inspiration: Mike Shinoda from Linkin Park and Immortal Technique
Genre: Rap/Hip-Hop
I've gotten that it's a long @$$ verse but i wouldn't know how to split that up.