They tear off my clothes with their teeth angry growls filling the silence. I lay still too far gone to scream. They sink their teeth into my flesh drawing warm crimson blood. A small wolf comes forward his eyes bright and hungry. He takes a bite at me earning a snarl from the biggest wolf. The little one shrinks away looking at me longingly. The others continue snapping at me their warm breath tickling my cold skin as drool drips from their mouths eyes consumed with blood-lust. I make no sound, no attempt to move, I just stay still. They tear at my clothes eagerly removing the thick layers of fabric the only thing keeping them from the warm flesh underneath. I close my eyes counting the seconds that tick by. I think and wonder what heaven will be like. Will it be like the bible says or will it be what I imagine it as? Or maybe I’ll go to hell. A place filled with fire and torture or a place filled with your worst fears? Will I see the white light? Will an angel come down and take me away? Or will Lucifer drag me down to hell? Strange thing is I didn’t mind if I died right now. The wolves were merely hunting for food so they could survive. And I’ll go to heaven were I won’t have to feel any pain, sorrow, or grief; I’ll be happy, content, and calm. But then if I go to hell I’ll be in pain for all eternity. A loud blood curdling scream filled the air as pain shot through my arm. My eyes snapped open as my heart pumped with fear. It was like cold water was splashed on my face bringing my senses back to life. A wolf was biting roughly into my arm trying to rip it off; I realized the screaming was me. Tears ran down my cheeks as I scream and begin fighting off the wolves. They fight back harder as I kicked them off with a force I didn’t know I had. I gather the last of my strength as they charge toward mouths covered in blood dripping from them like saliva.
Something took over me then. An overwhelming instinct that was impossible to ignore. Blood-lust and adrenaline filled me all other emotions devoid. I stood firm muscles tensed and fists clenched, legs spread, I crouched down ready to pounce. I kept my face blank my eyes challenging them. The biggest one-the pack leader-came first his teeth mere inches away from my face when I pounced on him. He yelped in surprise as I tackled him to the ground using my body weight to knock him down.
The others came at me mouths drawn back their bodies shaking with rage. I threw the alpha his body connecting with a boulder. They came at me from all sides knocking my feet off the ground. Something snapped out of my back catching me as I fell. The pack stared at me in surprise and fear. They started slowly backing away as I stared at them ready to attack again. Slowly and carefully never taking my eyes off me they slinked back into the woods melting in the darkness, the leader followed turning his head to look at me one last time his eyes piercing. He huffed and ran after the others.
The blood-lust left as soon as it had come. My body sagged overcome with pain and exhaustion. My vision blurred and flickered. I fell limp in the ice cold snow a single iridescent black feather floated above me before darkness consumed me.
Iphigeni try reading the whole thing before you criticize
stupid b.i.t.c.h
b* i *t *c* h
please tell me what i need to fix that would be very helpful thnx
Something took over me then. An overwhelming instinct that was impossible to ignore. Blood-lust and adrenaline filled me all other emotions devoid. I stood firm muscles tensed and fists clenched, legs spread, I crouched down ready to pounce. I kept my face blank my eyes challenging them. The biggest one-the pack leader-came first his teeth mere inches away from my face when I pounced on him. He yelped in surprise as I tackled him to the ground using my body weight to knock him down.
The others came at me mouths drawn back their bodies shaking with rage. I threw the alpha his body connecting with a boulder. They came at me from all sides knocking my feet off the ground. Something snapped out of my back catching me as I fell. The pack stared at me in surprise and fear. They started slowly backing away as I stared at them ready to attack again. Slowly and carefully never taking my eyes off me they slinked back into the woods melting in the darkness, the leader followed turning his head to look at me one last time his eyes piercing. He huffed and ran after the others.
The blood-lust left as soon as it had come. My body sagged overcome with pain and exhaustion. My vision blurred and flickered. I fell limp in the ice cold snow a single iridescent black feather floated above me before darkness consumed me.
Iphigeni try reading the whole thing before you criticize
stupid b.i.t.c.h
b* i *t *c* h
please tell me what i need to fix that would be very helpful thnx