hows the beginning of my poem?

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i just stared writing it i haven't written much this is the first verse:

On my lonely quite nights
There is no one in my sight
Like the stars that shine upon me
The sea sparkles with delight
I perched myself on the grass
Under a leafless tree

what do you think? its my first poem :D thought i'd into poetry
 
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