How's my essay so far? Help me out?

Ashleyy

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Have you ever took the time to just think? Think about life and they way we live it? The things people do and whats left unsaid. I always have thought about the way life works, wondering all these profound questions. Why some people do what they do, why we say things we don't mean, why we take life for granted.
Recently over summer, i saw something that really mad me think about the way we live and the actions we take. Fifteen year old, Larry King, was murdered for being gay. I know that i don't personally relate to his sexuality choices, but seeing this story really made me think about how a person could do this to a young boy, a boy only in eighth grade. I don't understand what's going through peoples minds when they have the thought to murder or hurt someone in this way. Everyday, thousands of people die for incidents that could easily be prevented. I have met some amazing people in my life who are gay, and i see nothing wrong with it what so ever. But that's not the point, the point is that the world we live in is so stereotypical and criticizes every little thing, and its only getting worse.


ah i dont know what else to add to this to make it an actual essay? is it good so far?
i have to write about a turning point in my life, and i figured this would be a good topic
what else should i write??
 
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