how's my composition ?I'm not english-speaking?

zhujing

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I'm a chinese student preparing for the national examination of master degree candidates in China .
one course of this examination is english ,and it require us to write a composition about the conveyed meaning of a cartoon in the paper .
give me some suggestion about my composition ,thanks alot .

Quickly running ahead to the termination called “divorce ”, a bridegroom handing with his beautiful bridge has just started from the start called “church”,several seconds before . Such a transient period of their entire marriage almost makes them unknown about the other’s personality .
This ridiculous cartoon simply ,obviously ,and satirically illustrates such a serious phenomenon of the mounting divorce rate ,in our society .Due to the influence of the conservative character of traditional confucian ideology,divorce is deemed as irresponsible and unacceptable behavior to most chinese families in the past .However ,with the rapid development of society and certain facets of assimilated ideology by the western ,our social members even prefer to choose divorce ,when any part of a couple feels the other one not suitable to him or her ,even neglecting the negative influence on their children .In the end ,the healthy environment of growing up and the development of their next generation becomes the pathetic sacrifice of their irresponsibility .
As adults ,we should enhance the education about the responsibility of marriage to facilitate the construction of the huge project of harmonious society ,which needs every social members’endeavor .Without the responsibility of marriage ,harmonious families and society must be remained out of reach ,forever .
 
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