I accept all feedback, positive and negative. If positive say what you liked about it. If negative say what you didnt like and what I can improve on. Im 16.
Bout to tear this up,
Putting my lyrical rhythm to tha test,
Spitting at me is like a disease in ya chest,
Ill invade ya brain, ya mind and ya ears,
I charge money to the game like a cashier,
The world is cold,
Seems like ive never been told,
Be standing in tha hot sun, waiting for the rain to come,
And it feel so fucking good, but dog this aint no fun.
Raps been shot, a bullet to the chest
So close to death not even the doc can resurrect.
At night the trees talk when ya walk by,
They dont say nothing cheerful, ya better listen
Be careful.
Thanks alot guys this is only about 45 seconds of rapping (im 1/3 of the way there).
Bout to tear this up,
Putting my lyrical rhythm to tha test,
Spitting at me is like a disease in ya chest,
Ill invade ya brain, ya mind and ya ears,
I charge money to the game like a cashier,
The world is cold,
Seems like ive never been told,
Be standing in tha hot sun, waiting for the rain to come,
And it feel so fucking good, but dog this aint no fun.
Raps been shot, a bullet to the chest
So close to death not even the doc can resurrect.
At night the trees talk when ya walk by,
They dont say nothing cheerful, ya better listen
Be careful.
Thanks alot guys this is only about 45 seconds of rapping (im 1/3 of the way there).