words need improvement..? *
*BQ....Will you help me finish ..... thoughts?
these headwaters
meet here
surrounded by it's wetlands
they've brought sediment...
pebbles, tumbled smooth
to meet the secluded,
ragged edged, stone bank
unearthed... left sharp
as rivers mixed
end their flow
comforted, silenced within
the musical birdsong
that greets to rejoice
the refreshing arrival
at dawn they hear the Loon
it's cry still mystifies
the morning Dove as she
attempts to coo
him back to rest
*please...continue feel free to fix my break-lines...Oh Please?
Oh....does my Dove have to mourn?
...
*BQ....Will you help me finish ..... thoughts?
these headwaters
meet here
surrounded by it's wetlands
they've brought sediment...
pebbles, tumbled smooth
to meet the secluded,
ragged edged, stone bank
unearthed... left sharp
as rivers mixed
end their flow
comforted, silenced within
the musical birdsong
that greets to rejoice
the refreshing arrival
at dawn they hear the Loon
it's cry still mystifies
the morning Dove as she
attempts to coo
him back to rest
*please...continue feel free to fix my break-lines...Oh Please?
Oh....does my Dove have to mourn?
...