YogurtFairy
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I'm writing a story, and I'm trying to kill a character off (Temporarily... It's one of those weird, time-warping things) by having a bunch of metal and broken glass falling on him in an accident.
He doesn't die at first, but after getting to the hospital, it was already too late.
An important detail is that they were having trouble stopping the bleeding, but... The problem I have is that... Wouldn't the doctors be able to do something about that? I'm also considering infection, and the character in question has a weak immune system anyway. Still, there are antibiotics.
If anyone knows of ANYTHING, please tell me, becase there's nothing I hate more than plot holes.
He doesn't die at first, but after getting to the hospital, it was already too late.
An important detail is that they were having trouble stopping the bleeding, but... The problem I have is that... Wouldn't the doctors be able to do something about that? I'm also considering infection, and the character in question has a weak immune system anyway. Still, there are antibiotics.
If anyone knows of ANYTHING, please tell me, becase there's nothing I hate more than plot holes.