how to write " stops me from brething" in a much more poetic way?

[Chloe]

I don't know. leaves me breathless? takes away my air? just trying to help... are those bad?

 

[wild rose]

how to write " stops me from brething" in a much more poetic way??

 

[Devil's Advocate]

I feel as though I'm slowly drowning
I fly so high in this rarefied atmosphere It is difficult to breathe
Your beauty heats up the air that it hurts to breathe

 

[jimbob_d_squirl]

whisks the air from my breath
takes my breath away
gives anew the impossibility of breath
leaves me breathless

hope i helped

 

[jimbob_d_squirl]

whisks the air from my breath
takes my breath away
gives anew the impossibility of breath
leaves me breathless

hope i helped