iceyblue62093
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This is for an essay project, so I was thinking of switching back and forth between Gretel's life and the witch's is their anything I can do to make it more scary, like how would the witch's life be?... And maybe Gretel's life could become ritch instead of being very poor, and have the witch be poor and lonely. And that's why she lure's people to her candy covered cottage in the woods. But is their anything I can do to make the witch's life seem evil at first? Or anything really at all to make the story seem more scary, those are the only ideas, and the essay project has to be based on a fabel story. Please don't steal my ideas 
But any help would be greatly appriciated I also don't know how to open the story either, so if you could please help I'd really appriciate it Please no rude answers either Thank you
But any help would be greatly appriciated I also don't know how to open the story either, so if you could please help I'd really appriciate it Please no rude answers either Thank you