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the home is VACANT for years on after? Ok so the crazy mother dies, the crazy daughter dies...and then the house just sits there for four years...I want to fill in more there...about how the house just sat there lonely and vacant...cold...with all of their belongings inside...they had no family....and I was the person who found the remains of their (non valuable) treasures.
Im trying to make it sound believable/alive...ish....how can I emphasize the home....I mean imagine a normal neighborhood in the woods...on street where families live...only theres a scary abandoned home.....
Thanks! I kind of want a few sentences to build up on it, its the final closing of an entire story.
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Thanks, person number one, however I want to finally CLOSE up the story, not go on and on. So this is closure, within just a few sentences.
oooo Tyler I freakin love that...
Im trying to make it sound believable/alive...ish....how can I emphasize the home....I mean imagine a normal neighborhood in the woods...on street where families live...only theres a scary abandoned home.....
Thanks! I kind of want a few sentences to build up on it, its the final closing of an entire story.
Best answer will be passed out in 1hr, promise!!
Thanks, person number one, however I want to finally CLOSE up the story, not go on and on. So this is closure, within just a few sentences.
oooo Tyler I freakin love that...