how many times have you been on the toilet and a poem pops in your head?

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Awkward Ash

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sitting down
get this over
sudden rush of thoughts
oh no
I’ve got no pen
even lead
and if I did
there’s no paper in here
Maybe shout
record all the words
Okay now I’m really exaggerating this isn’t some kind of dream or anything oh crap I really need to get out of here!

Ears are ringing
Time’s a ticking
Phrases dripping
Away from me!
Come on, come on!
Finally OH!
Jump up
Pull pants
Flush
Wash hands
Fling the door
Run to the phone
There’s paper nearby
Find a pen
Sit down again
No
No
Please don’t be gone
But unfortunately
Only in toilets
Do the real ones sink
And then spill from a brink
Into a twister
Down to the sewage
There it’ll meet
More phrases and words
Wrapped like sweets in a jar
On invisible scrolls
To invisible worlds
Of all stories untold
Goodbye, Aurevoir

feedback?
 
This made me laugh hilariously.
You could have used eyeliner on toilet paper you know?? That is, if your make-up is kept in the bathroom.
 
This made me laugh hilariously.
You could have used eyeliner on toilet paper you know?? That is, if your make-up is kept in the bathroom.
 
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