1st line: alliteration?
5th line: personification?
7th line: internal rhyme
7th and 8th line: slant rhyme
9th line: simile?
Do these look like? You see anyother different?
I wrote this poem. I need to have six, but I think I'm at 4 or 5? Please help?
My body coasts contently in clear crystal water,
No knowledge of where her currents wander.
For hours with no intention of my coarse to alter,
I glide with nothing but nature to be ponder.
The sun peeks through the lush leaves above,
warming my face and all nature with love.
I breathe the fragrant air of natures lair,
and Eden’s beauty I try to compare.
Like an ice cube in a drink,
I am transparent to natures ink.
I am now a silent observer to natures asunder,
As well a part of that harmonious wonder.
5th line: personification?
7th line: internal rhyme
7th and 8th line: slant rhyme
9th line: simile?
Do these look like? You see anyother different?
I wrote this poem. I need to have six, but I think I'm at 4 or 5? Please help?
My body coasts contently in clear crystal water,
No knowledge of where her currents wander.
For hours with no intention of my coarse to alter,
I glide with nothing but nature to be ponder.
The sun peeks through the lush leaves above,
warming my face and all nature with love.
I breathe the fragrant air of natures lair,
and Eden’s beauty I try to compare.
Like an ice cube in a drink,
I am transparent to natures ink.
I am now a silent observer to natures asunder,
As well a part of that harmonious wonder.