How is this song that I started writing?

Vince

New member
This new song is part 2 of a love song I wrote. The first song is called Em. The first one she liked a lot. I love her so much that I started writing a second song.

“Em, Song 2”

This is my second shot
To write a punk rock song
That’s supposed to be a love song

(Instrumental)

Well, you all know the name of the girl I love
She’s so sweet, like an angel, she must’ve come from the heavens above
She had a troubled past with her a-- hole dad
That man’s a piece of s---, he really makes me mad

If I ever found him I would kick his s---
I would let him know that he ain’t worth d---
‘Cause I love this girl every night and day
I love her so much but there’s something I gotta say

I need to make a confession
I don’t have a real profession
But singing into a mic
Has it’s benefits

This is the sound of my life
A life you’d never get
This is the sound of my life
My life is so full of s---
This is the sound of my life
But you don’t even give a f---
This is the sound of my life
I’d like to say “Welcome to the suck”

I could use every cliché
To let you know why I feel this way
But there’s somethin’ I can’t explain, why you love me too
I’m a f---ing idiot, but there ain’t nothin’ I wouldn’t do for you

Back to our shattered lives, back to reality
The one we build up from the ground, just you and me
If you need a shoulder to cry on, I’ll be there baby
One day we’ll get married, maybe

This is the sound of her life
A life you'd never get
This is the sound of her life
Her life is so full of s---
This is the sound of her life
But you don't even give a f---
This is the sound of her life
She'd like to say "Welcome to the suck!"

(I need another verse here. This verse needs to be about looking at things from a better perspective.)

This is the sound of our lives
Two lives you'd never get
This is the sound of our lives
Our lives are so full of s---
This is the sound of our lives
But you don't even give a f---
This is the sound of our lives
We no longer "Welcome to the suck!"
 
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