I've searched forever but never have found
The one thing I need to be there again.
The way I felt then is now so profound.
I can't understand what happened back then.
I want to believe I'll find it once more
And recrate now what I used to know.
To feel the same way as I felt before
Instead of my spirits sinking so low.
I still have six lines left...but how is this looking? Do you understand it? Does it make sense?
All lines have to have 10 syllables....any suggestions for the other lines?
The one thing I need to be there again.
The way I felt then is now so profound.
I can't understand what happened back then.
I want to believe I'll find it once more
And recrate now what I used to know.
To feel the same way as I felt before
Instead of my spirits sinking so low.
I still have six lines left...but how is this looking? Do you understand it? Does it make sense?
All lines have to have 10 syllables....any suggestions for the other lines?